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The format is correct, I understand you are 10 so you are a few years younger than us, But MY personal opinion is it would need a bit more detail. Give examples on what ranks you want, there are only a few you can apply for so just list them to make it look better, And take your time. Tell us what you really think, Be honest about everything. If you rush it, it makes it seem like it isnt a good one cause you are trying to get a rank as fast as possible. I say, You should quick edit this if you can, and Make it more detailed. Etc.What he said.